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The essay is one of the most important parts of the college application. A compelling narrative, one that lets your personality shine through while tying together the different elements of your life, can tip the admissions odds in your favor. You should exude humility, intellectual curiosity, thoughtfulness, self-awareness, leadership, and ambition. We'll help you do so while maintaining your true voice.

I Replace adverbs with strong verbs when possible.love really like throwing out the garbage. Most teens dread the exhausting, two-minute trek to the curb, but I find solace "Solace in" is more idiomatic.in on my daily dumpster walk. Every night at 10 PM Every day, I hear my mother lock the entrance, cueing entrance. She cues me to empty out the garbage cans on the main floor. As I lug carry pounds of many losing lotto tickets, candy wrappers, and crushed coffee cups Use stronger imagery to paint a picture of your duties.drinks on my back, I take took a sigh of relief knowing that we’ve survived This is wordy.managed to make it through yet another night shift See extended comment.at the family business.

I’ve worked The tone here is a bit formal compared to the rest of your writing.laboured at the family business since I was being ten years old. Of course, Focus on what you did, not on what you didn't do.I wasn’t a fifth-grade student ringing up customers or reciting the day’s winning lotto numbers like my parents were. I spent Here, the simple past works best. The modal verb is unnecessary. I would've spent most of my time either restocking or eating from the candy aisle—to my parents’ parent's pride and disappointment, respectively. Not until my freshman year did they give me permission to man the cash register, which had mesmerized me for years.

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Hi John! This essay does a great job showcasing not only your knack for software development, but also how your family’s business allowed you to mature a bit quicker than others. However, I'd consider reconstructing the first two paragraphs. The opening of your essay leads me to believe that you'll go on to discuss your experiences at the family business, but from the third paragraph on, you mostly focus on software development. By the end of the essay, the introduction feels distant and irrelevant.

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We'll make sure your writing is easy to read, compelling, and reflects your true voice.

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We'll suggest ways to optimize the structure of your essay to best reflect your narrative.

Areas for improvement

We'll point out areas your essay falls short and suggest ways to improve your writing.

Strength of topic

We'll provide a 2–3 paragraph evaluation of the overall strength of your essay.

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The college essay is one of the most important parts of your application. Put your best foot forward by having one of our consultants polish your piece, ensuring it reflects your story in the best light possible while maintaining your true voice.

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No, but we are here to help you put your best foot forward. Since the admissions process is holistic and unpredictable, a strong essay alone is not enough to guarantee acceptance. However, our consultants will help you feel confident in your writing and tell an engaging story, all while keeping your voice intact.

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