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I am confined by my name. The active construction better captures the reader's attention.My name confines me. I am the latest iteration in a long line, the third to be exact, This is wordy. Consider this edit instead.third to inherit a dusty family heirloom: the name Ambrose. There are multiple reasons why I "Abhor" is alarming word choice. Perhaps use "dislike" or "disapprove"?abhor my name, whenever. Whenever my mom announces it in "Announces at" is more idomatic than "announces in."at a family gathering, three people answer, and my Dad opens all my mail thinking that its it's his. Yet the more pressing reason that I dislike my name is that it sounds The tone here is a bit formal compared to the rest of your writing.primeval, and I am constantly in the shadow of those who came before me This is commonplace way to describe the effect of a family's legacy on your identity. Be specific.compared to my dad and grandpa.
What is the context here?One day, trying to express anger at my name, I fixed the dangling modifier here.I complained to my father listened to my complaint without much of a reaction , who did not react much. He shrugged, saying names are just names; they don’t define who you are. I tried to argue, but I realized he might be right and I wondered if I was searching for meaning in the wrong place.
OVERALL COMMENTS:
Hi Ambrose! This is a thoughtful essay in which you discuss how your family’s legacy has impacted your sense of identity and how you overcame the burden of their expectations. For those reasons, this topic has promise to be a compelling personal statement. However, your essay requires some edits to achieve that promise. First, I recommend that at the end of your second paragraph, you add more detail as to why that conversation with your father was so pivotal, as it significance is currently ambiguous to the reader.
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